Everyone's sisters are very good,
They are always in a super mood.
My sister's name is Mahi,
She loves writing, you see.
I love her very much,
She gives me a loving touch.
Please comment on her blog,
She likes to take a morning walk.
My sister is very cute,
She likes to play the flute.
She always makes me happy,
And has won many trophies.
For me, she is the the best member,
Sometimes, she has a bad temper.
She is my super hero,
She has a cat named Zero.
Well, my 8 year old brother made this poem. And, NO I DON'T have a cat named Zero. But still I am so, so, so, proud of him for making a poem *happy tears*.
If you like his poem do comment and follow me for frequent updates.
Your words (and follows) matter.
Thank you!
Loved it kiddo... Keep writing, keep growing...
ReplyDeleteToo gud as per his age... Keep writing....
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem! Keep it up ♥️
ReplyDeleteSuperb Rachit keep it up����
DeleteThank you so much, didi!
DeleteSuperb keep it up beta 👍👌
ReplyDeleteThank you, maybe you could follow my blog as well!!
DeleteSuperb poem keep it up beta 👍 👌
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I will fell happier if you follow my sister's blog
DeleteVery good Rachit love your poem keep writing want to see more
ReplyDeleteThank you Durva didi!
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